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The image consists of two diagrams detailing the current and proposed road systems. In the "Road System as it is now" diagram, it shows a City Road intersecting with Forest Road and River Road, with Lane connecting to River Road; there are 9 houses (3 along City Road, 2 along Forest Road, 4 along River Road), and 4 frequent accident spots (2 on Forest Road, 1 on City Road, 1 at the intersection of City Road and Forest Road). In the "Proposed Road System in future" diagram, it indicates the introduction of a roundabout at the intersection of City Road, Forest Road, and River Road; additional connecting paths from Lane directly to the roundabout; 9 houses remain in the same locations and 4 new traffic lights at key junctions (1 at the school's exit to City Road, 1 at the intersection of Lane and River Road, 1 on Forest Road before the roundabout, and 1 on City Road before the roundabout).

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The diagrams illustrate a road system in the present and the plan changed in the future to alleviate the tally of accidents.

It is clear that school and a supermarket will remain unchanged. In contrast, a roundabout and traffic lights will be added. Meanwhile, the new road system will be more organized and easier to navigate. Additionally, the houses will be shifted to near the intersection.

In the northwest, the school will be maintained at the same location. Moreover, the traffic lights system will be installed in the crossroads of City Road and Lown Lane. Nearby, the complex of houses will be moved with the same size.

In the northeast, the road to the supermarket will be differently changed, while the supermarket will be located in the same situation. Conversely, a roundabout will be added in the middle of the road integration. In addition, the road merge will be comprehensively made.

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the changes to the road system but contains inaccuracies and irrelevant information. The description is not always clear, and there are issues with organization and language. To improve, focus on accurately describing the key changes shown in the diagrams, avoid making claims not supported by the visual information, and ensure the language is clear and precise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The introduction mentions changes but doesn't provide a clear overview. The body paragraphs are disjointed and lack clear topic sentences. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are weak, making it difficult to follow the description of the changes. For example, the connection between the school and supermarket remaining unchanged and the addition of a roundabout and traffic lights is not clearly established. The statement about houses being shifted near the intersection is inaccurate based on the visual description. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on creating a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific aspect of the changes, and a conclusion. Use transition words and phrases to connect ideas and ensure a logical flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary. There is some repetition of words and phrases, such as 'will be' and 'in the same location.' The vocabulary used is not always precise or appropriate for describing the road system and proposed changes. For example, 'tally of accidents' is not the most natural phrasing, and 'road integration' and 'road merge' are vague. To improve lexical resource, try to use synonyms and a wider range of vocabulary to describe the different aspects of the road system and the changes being made. Focus on using more precise and descriptive language to convey the information accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and inaccuracies. There are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. For example, 'the plan changed' should be 'the planned changes,' and 'traffic lights system will be installed' is awkward phrasing. There are also issues with article usage and prepositional phrases. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, carefully review your writing for errors in grammar and sentence structure. Pay attention to verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Practice using a variety of sentence structures to improve the complexity and accuracy of your writing.

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