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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes which took place in the resort town of PalmGrove which is 450 kilometers from the nearest city from 1950 to 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes which took place in the resort town of PalmGrove which is 450 kilometers from the nearest city from 1950 to 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays the layout changes of a location in the years 1950, 1975, and 2000. For 1950: two lane road, six hotels, one dock, two beaches. For 1975: four lane road, eight hotels, three docks, two beaches. For 2000: four lane road, eleven hotels, three docks, two beaches, one airport.

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These maps show the alteration of the resort town Palm Grove which is situated 450 kilometres far from the nearest city between 1950 and 2000.

The maps of the 1950, 1975, and 2000 have changed rapidly. In 1950 there are just 2 lane road and few houses. In 1975 and 2000 the houses amount have raised, and the lane road is multiplied for 4. In 2000 we can notice the airport and dock, hotel. The beaches are shown in all of the 3 years. In 1950 and 1975 there are bridges on the beach, and we see the change of the size of it. In 1975 and 2000 they stand bigger than 1950. There are also houses on the beaches in 1975 and 2000. In 1975 and 2000 the road of the town was improved and asphalted.

We can see that year by year the town stays bigger and changes steadily.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and generalizations. More specific data and clearer comparisons would improve the response. The language is also somewhat imprecise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The sentences are not well-connected, leading to a choppy and disjointed feel. Paragraphing is present but could be improved to group related ideas more effectively. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'however,' 'in contrast') to link ideas and sentences more smoothly. Consider organizing the report by comparing specific features across the years (e.g., changes in the road, number of hotels, etc.) to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat limited. There is a lack of precision in word choice, and some words are used inappropriately ('houses amount have raised'). To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to urban development and infrastructure. For example, instead of 'houses,' use 'accommodations,' 'buildings,' or 'hotels.' Instead of 'lane road is multiplied for 4,' use 'the two-lane road was expanded to a four-lane road.' Focus on using synonyms and paraphrasing to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. Errors include incorrect verb tenses ('there are just 2 lane road'), subject-verb agreement issues ('houses amount have raised'), incorrect preposition usage ('450 kilometres far from'), and awkward phrasing ('the lane road is multiplied for 4'). There is a limited range of sentence structures, and many sentences are simple and repetitive. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice using a variety of sentence types (e.g., complex sentences with subordinate clauses) to enhance grammatical range. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and word order.

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