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Band 5+: The multiple line graph shows cell phone usage among males and females in Anytowne during the period from 1996 to 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays a graph depicting cell phone use in Brazil from 1996 to 2002, with separate lines for men, women, and both sexes. In 1996, 1,000 men, 1,500 women, and 2,500 both sexes used cell phones. In 1997, numbers rose to 1,200 men, 1,600 women, and 2,800 both sexes. The 1998 figures reached 1,300 men, 1,700 women, and 3,000 both sexes. In 1999, men numbered 1,400, women 1,800, both sexes 3,200. For the year 2000, 1,500 men, 1,850 women, and 3,300 both sexes were recorded. 2001 saw 1,700 men, 2,000 women, and 3,500 both sexes. Finally, in 2002, cell phone use reached 2,000 for men, 2,500 for women, and 3,800 for both sexes.

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The line graph provides information about mobile phone usage among men and women in Brazil between 1996 and 2002. Overall, men’s index was slightly lower than women’s, but neither indicator passed the 2.000 mark.

To begin with, in 1996 the number of women and men who used mobile phones had some similarities, the rate was 1,500. The indicator rose gradually for next 3 years, but women’s was a dozen more, than men’s. From 2000 to 2002 the number of women who used the mobile phones in Brazil increased gradually up to 1,990. The number of men who used the phone experienced growth in 1998, however, in 1999 it returned to starting point: 1,500.

In addition, 3,000 people of both sexes used mobile in 1996, and this point grew moderately throughout 2 years, and in 1998 the number of women and men who used phone used the phone in Brazil was 3,400. 1999 to 2000 experienced moderate falls to 3,200, but despite this factor , from 2001 to 2002 the number of people who used the cell phones was only growing up to 3,700.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

number: 5

mobile: 4

phone: 4

women: 4

brazil: 3

phones: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report identifies some trends but contains inaccuracies and lacks specific data. The organization is present but could be improved. To improve, focus on providing accurate data points and making direct comparisons between the trends of men and women. Also, ensure that the overall trends are clearly stated in the introduction and conclusion.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas within and between paragraphs needs improvement. Transitions between sentences and ideas are sometimes abrupt, making it difficult for the reader to follow the trends and comparisons. For instance, the shift from discussing individual usage to combined usage lacks a clear connection. Consider using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'similarly,' 'in contrast,' 'however') to link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate. For example, using 'index' to describe mobile phone usage is not appropriate. There are also instances where more precise vocabulary could have been used to describe the trends (e.g., 'increased significantly' instead of 'grew moderately'). To improve, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing trends and data, and ensure you understand the precise meaning of words before using them. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include incorrect verb tense ('the rate was 1,500' should be 'the rate was at 1,500'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('a dozen more, than men's'). There are also issues with article usage and sentence structure. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, particularly verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Proofreading carefully for these errors can significantly enhance the accuracy of your writing.

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