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Band 5+: The pie charts below show enrollment in different fields of study at a particular uni- versity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two pie charts titled "Clydesdale University Enrollment" with specific percentages for Men and Women: For Men, Social Sciences 25%, Engineering 45%, Humanities 10%, Education 20%; For Women, Social Sciences 15%, Engineering 20%, Humanities 30%, Education 35%.

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The pie chart compare the data about admissions in different fields of study in Clydesdale University.

As the information shows that most of the men chose the engineering field and least of them chose humanities field. However, greater number of women enrolled in education department while least of them get admission in social sciences.

On the one hand, 45% of male students get enrolled in Engineering department and 25% of them chose social studies for their study. However , 20% of them from remaining get admission in Education sector while the left of the 10% have enrollment in humanities for their study purpose.

On the other hand, most of the female students which are 35% of the total chose to study in Education department, whereas 30% got admission in Humanities. In contrast, only 15% of women get enrolled in social sciences for study while remaining 20% have enrollment in engineering field.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

study: 5

chose: 4

engineering: 3

field: 3

humanities: 3

enrolled: 3

education: 3

department: 3

while: 3

admission: 3

social: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the pie charts and makes relevant comparisons. There are a few minor inaccuracies (e.g., stating that the least number of women enrolled in social sciences, when engineering is also the same percentage). To improve, ensure complete accuracy in data reporting and vary sentence structure more to enhance readability.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents the information in a generally understandable manner, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The use of cohesive devices is present but could be more sophisticated to enhance the connection between ideas. Consider using more varied transition words and phrases to guide the reader through the comparison of the two pie charts. Paragraphing is adequate but could be refined to group related information more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Some phrases are a bit repetitive (e.g., 'get admission,' 'chose'). Try to incorporate synonyms and more specific terms to describe the data. For instance, instead of 'get admission,' you could use 'were admitted,' 'enrolled,' or 'were accepted into.' Expanding your range of vocabulary will make the report more engaging and demonstrate a better command of the English language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'The pie chart compare' should be 'The pie charts compare' or 'The pie chart compares.' Also, 'least of them chose humanities field' should be 'fewest of them chose the humanities field.' Pay close attention to these areas and proofread carefully to minimize errors. Varying sentence structure would also enhance the overall quality of the writing.

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