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Band 8+: The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group used to watch television in Canada in two different years.

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The image displays two pie charts for the years 2009 and 2019: In 2009, the distribution is segmented into five categories with values 15%, 20%, 5%, 18%, and 8%, with the largest segment at 34%. In 2019, the distribution is segmented into the same number of categories with values 26%, 12%, 19%, 12%, and 4%, with the largest segment at 27%.

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The two graphs demonstrate the devices used by the 18-25 age group to watch television in Canada in two different years.

Overall, people used modern devices more in 2019 than in 2009. The use of TVs and computers decreased, while smartphones, tablets, and flat-screen TVs became more popular.

According to the information, the usage of laptops constituted twenty and twelve percent in 2009 and 2019, respectively. The percentage of conventional TVs was a mere 8 percent and roughly one quarter in 2009 and 2019, respectively.

As for the statistic for tablets, which amounted to 5% at the beginning, it increased slightly to 19%.

In 2009, only 15% of people watched television on mobile phones, but this figure increased significantly to 26% in 2019. Similarly, the proportion of people using flat-screen TVs rose from 8% to 27%, making it one of the most popular devices in 2019.T

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The report effectively addresses the task by comparing the two years and highlighting key trends. The overview is clear and provides a good summary of the shifts in device popularity. Data is presented accurately based on the provided description, and the comparison between categories is logical. To improve, ensure that all categories mentioned in the overview are clearly linked to their specific data points in the body paragraphs to maintain a seamless flow, and watch for minor typographical errors at the end of the text. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The progression of ideas is easy to follow. To reach a higher band, consider using more varied cohesive devices to link sentences more fluidly, rather than relying on standard introductory phrases like 'As for...' or 'In 2009...'. The transition between the description of laptops and TVs could be smoother.

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The vocabulary used is appropriate and effective for describing trends (e.g., 'constituted', 'amounted to', 'increased significantly'). There is a good attempt at using synonyms to avoid repetition. To improve, you could incorporate more sophisticated academic collocations and a wider range of precise adjectives to describe the magnitude of changes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a high level of grammatical accuracy with a good mix of complex and simple sentence structures. Punctuation is used correctly, and there are no noticeable errors that impede communication. The use of 'respectively' is handled well to manage multiple data points within a single sentence.

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