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Band 5+: The pie charts below show the percentage distribution of online sales across different product categories in a retail showroom in Kathmandu in 2015 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two pie charts titled 'Online Sales for Retail Showroom in Kathmandu in 2015 & 2020'. The 2015 chart shows sales percentages for four categories: Furniture at 18%, Clothing at 35%, Cosmetic at 22%, and Food items at 25%. The 2020 chart shows Furniture at 23%, Clothing at 30%, Cosmetic at 32%, and Food items at 15%.

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In the given pie chart it has shown products that are sold through online source in kathmandu in 2015 and 2020 respectively

Overall,there is a visible change in furniture ,cosmetics whereas there is a reletive change in food and clothing where it has increased vastly.

In year 2015 clothing seems to have most poportion of the piechart with 35 percent and furniture being the least purchased item in the chart being 18 percentile. followingly food items is recogniged as second most sales and thirdly cosmetic being third in the pie chart with 22 percentile.

On other hand, 2020 has some significantly diffrent structure comparitively with cosmectic overcoming clothing items and rising to be in the top of the chart with 32 percent and food items being least sales. furniture can be seen a bit of upward growth . Followingly clothing becames the runnerup in the chart.

In conclusion, there is a remarkable change in thosee two pie charts as many items have fulcuated there postions in those 5 years.

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clothing: 4

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items: 4

change: 3

furniture: 3

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The report covers the main features of the pie charts and makes relevant comparisons between the two years. The overall trends are identified, and specific data is included to support the observations. To improve, focus on using more precise language and avoiding informal expressions. Also, ensure that all percentage values are accurately reported and that the structure of the report is clear and logical.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The introduction is weak, and the overall structure feels disjointed. Transitions between ideas are abrupt, making it difficult to follow the analysis. Improve coherence by using clear topic sentences and logical transitions between paragraphs. For example, group the analysis of each year into separate paragraphs and use transition words to connect related ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is a lack of precision in word choice, such as using 'poportion' instead of 'proportion' and 'percentile' instead of 'percent'. Expand your vocabulary by using synonyms and more specific terms to describe the data. For example, instead of 'visible change,' consider using 'noticeable shift' or 'significant increase'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'clothing seems to have most poportion' should be 'clothing seems to have the largest proportion.' Focus on improving sentence structure and grammar by reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully. Pay attention to verb tense consistency and correct use of articles and prepositions.

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