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Band 7+: The pie charts compare the percentage of users across different age groups on Twitter, Facebook, and YouTube.

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The image displays three pie charts detailing user age group distributions for Facebook, YouTube, and Twitter. For Facebook, the age groups 10-17, 18-34, 35-49, 50-64, and 65+ represent 14%, 29%, 30%, 19%, and 8% of users, respectively. For YouTube, the same age groups account for 15%, 26%, 29%, 20%, and 10% of users. For Twitter, the distribution is 9% for 10-17, 40% for 18-34, 29% for 35-49, 18% for 50-64, and 4% for 65+.

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The pie charts provide comparisons of people from distinct age groups using three apps namely Facebook, Youtube and Twitter.

Overall, Users from the younger adult group (18-49) constitute the majority of users across all the three platforms. While Twitter is the most popular platform among the youngest adult group (18-34), Youtube and Facebook make up for a higher percentage of users from older adult categories (50+).

While the youngest adult group (18-34) dominated Twitter’s chart at 40%, it makes up for lower proportions in Facebook and Youtube at 29% and 26%, respectively. Moreover, Regarding users aged from 35 to 49 years old, Facebook is the largest category, at 30%, followed closely by the identical figures for Youtube and Twitter at 29%. Additionally, the teenage group (10-17) accounts for a lower proportion, at around 15% of Facebook and Youtube users and only 9% of that of Twitter.

By contrast, the figures for people aged more than 50 constitute the lowest rate. It is noticeable that there were one fifth of elderly people using Facebook, Youtube and Twitter. Furthermore, the proportion of elderly Youtube users (65+) is 10%, compared to only 8% and 4% in the figures for Facebook and Twitter.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

facebook: 7

youtube: 7

users: 6

adult: 4

group: 4

twitter: 4

people: 3

figures: 3

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Task Response

The report fully satisfies the requirements of the task. It provides a clear overview of the main trends, effectively grouping the data into logical categories (younger adults, middle-aged, and older users). The comparisons between the three platforms are well-integrated, and the data is presented accurately according to the visual description. The structure is logical, and the progression of ideas is smooth.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized, moving from a general overview to specific comparisons of age groups. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'While', 'Moreover', and 'By contrast' helps guide the reader through the comparisons. However, there are some minor issues with sentence flow and punctuation (e.g., 'Moreover, Regarding...') that slightly disrupt the seamless transition between ideas. To improve, ensure that transition words are used more naturally and that sentence structures are varied to avoid repetitive patterns.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate and effective for describing data, using terms like 'constitute', 'dominated', and 'proportions'. There is a good attempt to group age categories (e.g., 'younger adult group', 'teenage group'). However, there are some slightly awkward phrasings, such as 'make up for a higher percentage' (where 'make up' or 'account for' would be more precise) and 'the identical figures for'. Aim for more sophisticated collocations and ensure that word choices precisely match the mathematical context of the charts. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of complex sentence structures, particularly in the comparative sentences. However, there are several grammatical inaccuracies that prevent a higher score. For example, 'there were one fifth of elderly people' is grammatically incorrect (it should be 'one fifth of elderly people accounted for...'), and there are minor issues with preposition usage and capitalization. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement and the correct use of quantifiers and articles when describing statistical data.

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