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Band 5+: The pie charts show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1994,2004 and 2013.

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The image displays pie charts detailing new car sales distribution across categories in Australia for April in years 1994, 2004, and 2013 with respective totals: 42,900 units in 1994, 71,000 units in 2004, and 85,000 units in 2013; in 1994, Sedans comprise 76%, SUVs 12%, Others 12%; in 2004, Sedans represent 62%, SUVs increase to 17%, Others 21%; in 2013, Sedans constitute 51%, SUVs remain at 17%, Others expand to 32%.

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The pie chart illustrates the new cars were purchased in Australia in 1984,1993 and 2013

From an overall perspective, it is of note that sedans car were popular. Besides that,the trend for other car and suv were decidedly upwards in the period

During the first year of sales of the new car in 1984, 74% of sedan car was sale which reach the highest point in data.. Afterwards , the number of purchasing sedan car went down to 62% which means decline 14% in 10 years later. Besides that, from 7% for SUV’s car and 19% for others car in 1994 to 17% for SUV’s car and 21%for others car, the number of car saling in the Australian increased by 10% and 2% respectively

By comparison in 2013, the data of sedan car still declined to 51% which means it was plumbed 2 fold compared to the starting point. However, the number of others car which purchased continued rose to 32% and suv car remained unchanged after 9 years

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sedan: 3

number: 3

others: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with clarity. The organization is generally clear, presenting an overview followed by details for each year. To improve, ensure data accuracy by double-checking figures from the pie charts. Also, focus on using more precise language and varied sentence structures to enhance clarity and coherence.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is disrupted by inaccuracies and a lack of clear transitions. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related ideas. To improve coherence, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data and use transition words to connect ideas smoothly. Accuracy in data reporting is also crucial for maintaining a logical flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive ('car' is overused). There's an attempt to use descriptive language, but it lacks precision and variety. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to trends and changes (e.g., 'increased significantly,' 'remained stable,' 'experienced a decline').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles. Sentence structure is often awkward, affecting clarity. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on proofreading carefully for common errors and practicing sentence construction. Consider using a wider range of sentence structures to add complexity and sophistication to your writing.

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