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Band 7+: The table and graph below show the number of international tourists and the income of tourism in four countries in East Asia from 2000 to 2014.

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The image displays a table and a line chart titled "The income of tourism in billion USD" for four countries. For Thailand, the values for years 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2014 are 9.5, 11.6, 15.9, and 24.8 respectively. For South Korea, the values are 5.3, 6, 8.8, and 14.2 for the same years. Singapore's values are 7.7 in 2000, 9 in 2005, 11.6 in 2010, and 15.1 in 2014. Japan's values are 4.8 in 2000, 6.7 in 2005, 8.6 in 2010, and 13.4 in 2014. The line chart plots these figures, with a vertical axis scaled from 0 to 30 and a horizontal axis marking the years 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2014.

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The table and line graph illustrates the amount of international travellers and the income of tourism in four nations in East Asia between 2000 and 2014.

Overall, it can be seen in the graphs that tourism revenue increased in all four countries between 2000 and 2014, despite minor fluctuations in Singapore and Japan. Thailand consistently recorded the highest figures and experienced by far the most substantial growth, whereas Japan saw the smallest overall increase.

From the chart, it is clear that Thailand and South Korea witnessed an increase in tourism revenue. As for Thailand, its tourism revenue soared from 9.5 billion USD in 2000 to 24.8 billion USD in 2014, making it the country with the highest tourism income. Nonetheless, South Korea’s income also increased, from 5.3 billion USD to 14.2 billion USD in 2014. Interestingly, the discrepancy between the two countries gradually widened, highlighting Thailand’s leading position.

In contrast, the annual tourism revenue in Singapore and Japan fluctuated throughout the period. Regarding Singapore, its tourism revenue peaked at 15.1 billion USD in 2010, up from 7.7 billion USD in 2000, before declining slightly to 14.8 billion USD in 2014. Meanwhile, Japan’s tourism revenue dropped to 6.7 billion USD in 2005, then climbed to 13.4 billion USD in 2014.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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billion: 9

tourism: 8

revenue: 6

income: 3

between: 3

singapore: 3

japan: 3

thailand: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main trends in tourism income for the four countries. It provides a clear overview and highlights key features, such as Thailand's leading position and the overall increase across all countries. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the report mentions 'minor fluctuations' in Singapore and Japan, but the data shows a consistent increase for Singapore (no decline) and a slight dip for Japan in 2005. Additionally, the report incorrectly states that Singapore's revenue peaked in 2010 and then declined, whereas the data shows a continuous rise to 15.1 billion USD in 2014. The report also omits the number of international tourists, which is part of the task. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately represented and consider including information about tourist numbers if available.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure: introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'As for', 'Nonetheless', 'In contrast', 'Meanwhile') helps the reader follow the progression of ideas. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'From the chart, it is clear that' which is slightly vague, and the transition between the two detailed paragraphs could be smoother. Overall, the message is easy to follow and paragraphing is managed well.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary with appropriate use of synonyms and paraphrasing (e.g., 'illustrates', 'witnessed', 'soared', 'peaked', 'climbed', 'discrepancy'). The language is generally natural and precise. However, there is some repetition of 'tourism revenue' and 'increased', and a few phrases could be more sophisticated (e.g., 'experienced by far the most substantial growth' is slightly awkward). Overall, the lexical resource is strong and effectively conveys the data. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences and appropriate tenses. Grammar and punctuation are largely accurate, with only minor issues such as the subject-verb agreement in the first sentence ('table and line graph illustrates' should be 'illustrate') and a slight inconsistency in the description of Singapore's peak (the data says 15.1 in 2014, but the report says 'peaked at 15.1 billion USD in 2010' which is incorrect based on the visual description). However, these are minor and do not detract from the overall clarity. The range of structures is good, and the report is generally accurate.

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Band 7+: The table and graph below show the number of international tourists and the income of tourism in four countries in East Asia from 2000 to 2014.

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