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Band 4+: The table and pie chart illustrate populations in Australia according to different nationalities and areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a pie chart and a table detailing nationalities in Australia: the pie chart shows Australians at 73%, British at 7%, Chinese at 3%, New Zealanders at 2%, others at 14%; and the table breaks down city and countryside populations, indicating Australians 80% city/20% countryside, British 89% city/11% countryside, New Zealanders 90% city/10% countryside, Chinese 99% city/1% countryside, Dutch 83% city/17% countryside.

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The given table and pie chart demonstrates the population in australia according to different nationlities and the areas.

Overall, the population of Australian community is comparitively higher than other nationalities in countrysides. Whereas Chinese nationalities are higher in city areas. All these nationalities have significantly affects the overall population rate of australia.

The pie chart demostrates the australian population rate compared to other nationalities irrepestives of areas by 73% higher than other communities. While other nationalities from different european or asian nations have considered to be 2nd largest population of 14 % in australia . Whereas , british, Newzealander, chinease , dutch all have 3 to 7 % of population only.

The table depicts the city and country side population rate of australia, inspite of these data, australia have achieved the highest percenatge of population rate in country side but fallen to least populated nationality in city . Chinese have cracked australian and newzealand population rate by being the most nationality population rate of 99 % .

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the pie chart and table, and includes an overall statement. However, there are several inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data (e.g., stating Australians have the highest countryside population but are least in the city, which is not supported by the data). Some information is irrelevant or incorrectly compared. The report would benefit from more accurate data selection, clearer comparisons, and avoiding unsupported claims. Focus on selecting key features and making precise comparisons based on the given figures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present an overview and some comparisons, but the flow of ideas is often disrupted by unclear references and awkward phrasing. The paragraphing is present but not skillfully managed, and the logical progression from the pie chart to the table is not smooth. To improve, focus on organizing the information more clearly: start with a clear overview of the main trends, then describe the pie chart in one paragraph and the table in another, using clear linking words to connect ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive, with several inaccuracies (e.g., 'nationlities', 'irrepestives', 'percenatge'). There is an attempt to use some less common words (e.g., 'comparitively', 'significantly'), but these are often misused or misspelled. To improve, expand your range of topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'proportion', 'residents', 'urban/rural areas') and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Avoid informal or incorrect phrases like 'cracked the population rate'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('table... demonstrates'), incorrect verb forms ('have significantly affects'), and missing articles ('the population in australia'). Sentence structures are often simple or fragmented, and punctuation is inconsistent. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with relative clauses) and review basic grammar rules, especially subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and article usage. Proofreading carefully can help reduce errors.

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