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Band 7+: The table and the pie chart below show how young people in Tokyo, Japan, listened to music in the past month and their preference for live or recorded music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a table and a pie chart on listening preferences of young people in Tokyo, Japan. Table presents data on Live music, MP3 players, Internet, CDs divided by gender; Male: Live music 60%, MP3 players 79%, Internet 55%, CDs 19%; Female: Live music 44%, MP3 players 40%, Internet 42%, CDs 22%. Pie chart displays Preference percentages; Live 70%, Recorded 26%, Don't know 4%.

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The table provides the data about the ways of listening to music in East Asia country by young people, with the pie chart describing the preferences for live or recorded music. Overall, the Japanese boys show much higher interest in music compared to the girls.

In terms of music preference, live music received the highest percentage.

As can be seen from the table, the numbers of men who listened to music was much greater than females amount. Proportions of men’ preferences always exceeded 50%, with MP3 players being on the top of the list with 79%. However, this figure was not the same for women; generally, they were just under 50%, with the live music being the most flovoured one. The exception is CDs, with the percentages of 19% for males and 22% for females.

Looking at the pie chart, the overwhelming majority tend to choose live music, which is around 70 percent, while only 26% picked recorded versions.

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The report covers the main features of both the table and the pie chart and makes some relevant comparisons. However, there are some areas for improvement. The introduction could be more concise and directly state the purpose of the report. The report could benefit from more specific data references to support the claims made, and a clearer structure with more distinct paragraphing would enhance readability. Also, avoid using informal language such as 'boys' and 'girls' and instead use 'males' and 'females'.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, including an overview, detailed analysis of the table, and then the pie chart. Transitions between paragraphs are present but could be smoother to enhance the flow. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to connect ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, in the third paragraph, the transition from discussing men's preferences to women's could be more explicit.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to discuss the data, including terms like 'proportions,' 'overwhelming majority,' and 'preferences.' However, there's room to enhance the sophistication of the language used. For instance, instead of 'much greater,' consider using 'significantly higher.' Also, vary the vocabulary used to describe percentages and preferences to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a good command of grammar, with a mix of simple and complex sentences. However, there are a few grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'numbers of men who listened to music was much greater than females amount' could be improved to 'the number of men who listened to music was much greater than the number of women.' Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles and prepositions.

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