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Band 5+: The table below gives information about the five small companies in Britain that came top in a survey of staff conducted by a national newspaper to find out which companies are the best to work for. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays data for the five best small companies to work for in Britain, presented in a table format. 1st position: staff numbers 56, male/female ratio 30:70, under 35s/over 55s 77%/0%, staff turnover 15%, staff in high income bracket 34%. 2nd position: staff numbers 79, male/female ratio 47:53, under 35s/over 55s 59%/1%, staff turnover 18%, staff in high income bracket 48%. 3rd position: staff numbers 72, male/female ratio 74:26, under 35s/over 55s 82%/0%, staff turnover 10%, staff in high income bracket 74%. 4th position: staff numbers 76, male/female ratio 13:87, under 35s/over 55s 26%/8%, staff turnover 13%, staff in high income bracket 5%. 5th position: staff numbers 190, male/female ratio 51:49, under 35s/over 55s 93%/0%, staff turnover 3%, staff in high income bracket 2%.

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The given table compares the proportion of staff conducted by national newspaper in britain between five small companies to find out which companies are great to work for.

Overall, clear differences are evident among categories. 5th company recorded the highest values, followed by 3th company hold the second highest figures in some categories. In addition, 4th and 2th companies fall with in moderate range, whereas remaining companies remain lowest.

In detail, the number of staff and under 35 emplyoees recorded at 190 and 93% respectiviely in 5th company, while in others features it fell with in moderate range. The 3th company has 72 staff member but male/female ratio as well high income breaket has the highest number compared to the other companies which is at 74:26 and 74% respectiviely.

However, companies 2th and 4th have cantain 79 and 76 staff member, while company 2th has male/female ratio and income breaket 47:53, 48 percent respectiviely.

Additionally, 1th company has the least number of staff and staff turnover which is recorded at 56 and 5%. Moreover, other remaining categories remain low or some in moderate range.

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and a lack of specific data. The overview is present but could be more precise. The body paragraphs present some relevant information, but the organization and clarity could be improved. To improve, focus on providing more specific data from the table and ensuring accurate comparisons. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.

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The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information is not always logical. The introduction could be more concise and directly state the purpose of the report. The overall summary lacks a clear focus, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are not always well-established. Use transition words and phrases to improve the flow of ideas and create a more cohesive narrative. For example, words like 'similarly', 'in contrast', 'furthermore', and 'however' can help to guide the reader through the information. Also, try to group related information together to create more coherent paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is a reliance on simple words and phrases, which limits the ability to convey complex information effectively. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to business and employment. Use synonyms and more descriptive language to add depth and nuance to your writing. For example, instead of saying 'the highest values,' you could say 'the most significant figures' or 'the largest proportions.' Also, be careful with word choice to ensure that it accurately reflects the data presented.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors detract from the clarity and credibility of the writing. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Consider using online grammar checkers or seeking feedback from a language tutor to help identify and address areas for improvement. Pay attention to the correct use of articles, prepositions, and punctuation to enhance the accuracy of your writing.

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