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Band 5+: The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows UK acid rain emissions in million tonnes from various sectors from 1991 to 2007: Transport and Communication decreased from 3.4 (1991) to 0.2 (2007), Electricity, Gas and Water Supply dropped from 2.2 (1991) to 0.5 (2007), Other Industries fell from 1.2 (1991) to 0.4 (2007), Domestic fell from ~0.6 (1991) to ~0.1 (2007).

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The line graph provides a breakdown of acid rain pollutants from four different sections in the UK over 17 years.

It’s clear that total amount of emissions in UK significantly fell between 1991 and 2007 . Furthermore the most sharp dip had seen in the utilities sector.

In 1991 the major sector were electricity,gas and water supply section with nearly 3.3 millions of tons. Followed by utilities sector is other industries which one and hald times less than utilities sector with a bit more than 2 millions of tons. Interestingly the same results were between transport and communication and domestic sections with about 0.7 millions tons and a little bit more than 0.5 respectively.

Over 17 years period the almost all sections is considerably changed .Firstly utilities sector which had a domination position with roughly 3.3 millions of tones , however in 2007 dropped to only small 0.5 millions of tons.One of the interesting point is that while others sensibly fell only vehicle and communication a slightly increased and reached a peak with one million of tones in 2005

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The report addresses the task by summarizing the information about UK acid rain emissions. However, there are some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity in the description of the data. The report would benefit from more precise data referencing and a clearer structure. Also, the report contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect the overall clarity. To improve, focus on using more accurate data, structuring the report more logically, and refining grammar and vocabulary.

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The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing could be improved to better group related ideas. To improve coherence, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point and use transition words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, use phrases like 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'Furthermore' to guide the reader through your analysis.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and varied. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'utilities sector' instead of 'electricity, gas, and water supply sector') and overuse of simple words. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and sophisticated vocabulary related to environmental emissions and industrial sectors. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your range of expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede clarity. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work. Consider using online grammar checkers and seeking feedback from native English speakers to refine your writing.

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