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Band 6+: The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows UK acid rain emissions in million tonnes from various sectors from 1991 to 2007: Transport and Communication decreased from 3.4 (1991) to 0.2 (2007), Electricity, Gas and Water Supply dropped from 2.2 (1991) to 0.5 (2007), Other Industries fell from 1.2 (1991) to 0.4 (2007), Domestic fell from ~0.6 (1991) to ~0.1 (2007).

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The line graph illustrates the amount of acid rain emissions in the four different areas of the United Kingdom from 1990 to 2007

Overall, it is clear from the graph that amount of acid rain emissions fell considerably over the period shown. The most dramatic decrease was seen in the electricity, gas, and water supply sector.

In 1990, the amount of acid rain emissions in the electricity, gas, and water supply was around 3.4 million tonnes,whereas, emission from other industries was close to 2 million tonnes. Emissions from transport and communication as well as domestic sector were approximately 0.5 million tonnes.

In 2007, a dramatic decrease was seen in the electricity, gas, and water supply, where emission fell from 3.4 million tonnes to just 0.5 million tonnes. Similarly, emissions came from other industries were around 1.4 million tonnes. Emissions from domestic and transport and communication sectors were 0.2 0.6 million tonnes, respectively.

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million: 7

emissions: 6

tonnes: 5

amount: 3

electricity: 3

water: 3

supply: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. The report would benefit from a more comprehensive comparison of the sectors and a clearer overall structure. For improvement, focus on accurately representing the data and providing a more detailed analysis of the trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and attempts to highlight key trends, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. The flow of information is somewhat disjointed, particularly in the body paragraphs. Consider structuring the report with a clearer focus on comparing and contrasting the different sectors and their emission trends. Using cohesive devices more effectively would also enhance the overall readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. While words like 'dramatic decrease' are used, incorporating a wider range of synonyms and more specific terminology related to emissions could elevate the report. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'amount of acid rain emissions,' try variations like 'acid rain output' or 'emission levels.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a basic understanding of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate preposition usage. For example, sentences like 'Emissions came from other industries were around 1.4 million tonnes' need restructuring for grammatical correctness. Proofreading carefully for these errors is essential.

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