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Band 4+: The table below shows a breakdown of companies advertising expenditure in different media sectors in three countries, Australia, South Korea, and Brazil. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image provides the advertising expenditure in different media sectors for three countries: for TV, Australia 25, South Korea 27, Brazil 61; for Newspaper, Australia 23, South Korea 22, Brazil 16; for Radio, Australia 21, South Korea 21, Brazil 14; for Internet, Australia 15, South Korea 6, Brazil 10; for Sponsorship, Australia 8, South Korea 12, Brazil 4; for Direct Mail, Australia 8, South Korea 12, Brazil 1.

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The graph illustrates how much companies allocate on advertisement in several areas of the media field,in Australia,South Korea,and Brazil.

Overall all three countries spend the most on TV ad.Whereas direct mail is the least spent sector.

In TV promotion content Brazil invest the largest amount with 61,In contrast to Australia which expenditure were only 25.While they pay out the largest sum in newspaper advertising with 23,compared to other countries.Both Australia and South Korea expend on radio 21.

On the other hand Australia allocate the exact same amount on sponsorship and direct mail with 8.In a similar way South Korea pay 12 for those two sectors.However Brazil invest 4 to sponsorship,and 1 on direct mail

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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australia: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the data and makes relevant comparisons. There are some minor inaccuracies (e.g., Brazil's direct mail expenditure), and the organization could be slightly improved for clarity. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately represented and consider a more structured approach to comparing the countries and media sectors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt to organize the information, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and a lack of clear transitions. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related ideas. To improve coherence, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'similarly,' 'in contrast,' 'furthermore') to link sentences and paragraphs logically. Ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks the precision needed to fully convey the nuances of the data. There is some repetition of words like 'spend' and 'amount.' To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to advertising expenditure, such as 'allocate,' 'invest,' 'expenditure,' 'proportion,' and 'percentage.' Also, use synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with subordinate clauses) and carefully proofread for errors in grammar and punctuation. Pay attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement.

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