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Band 4+: The table below shows the changes in the number of visitor (in millions) to 5 tourist European attractions from 1981 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image details visitor numbers (millions) to five European attractions over three years: 1981 - The British Museum (2.98), The Rijksmuseum (2.44), Amusement Parks (7.50), Zoos (1.01), The National Aquatic Centre (3.85); 1991 - The British Museum (3.75), The Rijksmuseum (3.50), Amusement Parks (8.00), Zoos (1.00), The National Aquatic Centre (3.35); 2001 - The British Museum (4.30), The Rijksmuseum (4.28), Amusement Parks (7.01), Zoos (1.01), The National Aquatic Centre (3.21).

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this data presentes change the number of vistors in millions to five different european tourists attractions from the year 1981 to 2001.

in general amount of tourists change every year whether it increases or decreases and this table specifically shows interest of touristis in different european places and how it changed by millionsin these years.

in year 1981 the most public place for tourists was amusement park the number of vistors was 7.50 million and the most least place was zoos with 1.01 million visitors. however in 1991 the most preferred area was again was amusement park instead this year was less it stands by 6.80 million and surprisingly it was zoo with nearly same number as last year 1 million. by 2001 same way around most visited place was amusement park and the least was the zoo again.

this showed that tourists favourite stayed the same just the amount of the population was different.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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number: 3

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place: 3

amusement: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some overall trends and specific data points, but it lacks depth in analysis and comparison. To improve, focus on providing more specific comparisons between the attractions and the changes over time. Also, ensure that the data cited is accurate and that the report maintains a consistent level of detail throughout.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Consider organizing the report into distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the data, such as overall trends, specific attractions, or comparisons between different years. Using cohesive devices more effectively will also improve the flow of the report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more precise language to describe the changes and trends in visitor numbers. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased significantly,' 'remained stable,' 'fluctuated') and attractions. Also, avoid direct repetition of words like 'visitors' and 'amusement park' by using alternative phrases.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work. Consider using a grammar checker to help identify areas for improvement.

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