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Band 6+: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows visitor numbers to Ashdown Museum at 74,000 before refurbishment and 92,000 after. Satisfaction surveys reveal pre-refurbishment percentages: very satisfied - 15%, satisfied - 30%, dissatisfied - 40%, very dissatisfied - 10%, no response - 5%. Post-refurbishment results include very satisfied - 35%, satisfied - 40%, dissatisfied - 15%, very dissatisfied - 5%, no response - 5%.

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The table present the figure of tourists to Ashdown museum about the year before and the year after it was reconstructed. The chart illustrates the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their tour of Museum, during the same two years.

Overall, it can be seen that there was a considerable increase in the total number of visitors to the Ashdown Museum after its refurbishment. Similarly, the result of surveys of visitor satisfaction also changed positively, as the number of very satisfied and satisfied visitors increased, and on the other hand, the figure of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied decreased after its refurbishment.

The figure of total visitor before the refurbishment of Museum was 74,000, while the figure after its refurbishment increased to 92,000. The satisfaction ratio of visitors were 40 dissatisfied, 10 very dissatisfied, 5 no response and only 30 were satisfied and 15 very satisfied before its refurbishment; however, after its refurbishment, there was a significant difference in a visitors satisfaction ratio, and that were 40 satisfied, 35 very satisfied and 5 no response with only 15 dissatisfied and 5 very dissatisfied.

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satisfied: 7

dissatisfied: 6

after: 5

visitors: 5

figure: 4

museum: 4

refurbishment: 4

before: 3

satisfaction: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the data, including the increase in visitor numbers and the shift in satisfaction levels. It makes relevant comparisons between the two periods. However, there are some minor omissions and lapses, such as not explicitly stating the percentages in the overview and some grammatical inaccuracies. The report could be improved by ensuring all data points are clearly presented and by refining language for clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and minor lapses in cohesion. For example, the phrase 'and that were' is unclear, and the use of 'on the other hand' is slightly misplaced. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices more naturally to link sentences and ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and generally appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'reconstructed' for 'refurbished'). However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions, such as 'the figure of' used repeatedly, and 'satisfaction ratio' is not the most precise term. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'proportion' instead of 'ratio', 'visitor numbers' instead of 'figure of tourists'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors that affect clarity. For instance, 'The table present' should be 'The table presents', 'the figure of tourists to Ashdown museum about the year' is awkward, and 'the satisfaction ratio of visitors were' should be 'the satisfaction ratios were'. Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are run-ons. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement and sentence structure, and vary sentence types more.

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