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Band 6+: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image presents numerical data regarding Ashdown Museum visitors and their satisfaction surveys, with 74,000 visitors before refurbishment and 92,000 in the year after. Pie charts illustrate satisfaction levels: before refurbishment, 40% were dissatisfied, 30% satisfied, 15% responded very satisfied, 10% very dissatisfied, 5% gave no response; after refurbishment, 35% satisfied, 35% very satisfied, 15% dissatisfied, 5% very dissatisfied, 10% no response.

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The table compares the total numbers of visitors at Ashdown Museum in the year before and year after it was refurbished, while the pie illustrates survey of visitors’ satisfaction in both years.

Looking from an overall perspective, both pie charts have risen satisfaction significantly, while dissatisfaction has decreased considerably.

According to the table, museums attracted more people after the refurbishment. Visitor numbers have grown from 74,000 to 92,000 in the following year.

The satisfaction survey also illustrates the improvement of the visitor’s enjoyment. Satisfaction and dissatisfaction have been reversed after a year. And no response remained the same with 5 percent. It is clear that overall satisfaction categories are increased considerably after it was refurbished. After refurbishment increased up to 40 percent, and those who were dissatisfied went to down to 15 from 40. The changes of numbers show a major development on Ahsdown museum

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Task Response

The response appropriately addresses the task by summarising the main features of the table and pie charts, and making relevant comparisons between the two periods. It covers the key trends: the increase in visitor numbers and the shift in satisfaction levels. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the report states that 'no response remained the same with 5 percent,' but the visual description indicates it changed from 5% to 10%. Additionally, the report mentions 'overall satisfaction categories are increased considerably' and 'After refurbishment increased up to 40 percent,' which is unclear and may not accurately reflect the data (very satisfied rose to 35%, not 40%). The report also contains a typo ('Ahsdown'). To improve, ensure precise data reporting and clearer expression. Overall, the response is well-organised and meets the task requirements. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, there are some issues with coherence and cohesion. For example, the phrase 'Looking from an overall perspective' is slightly awkward, and the connection between sentences could be smoother. The use of cohesive devices is adequate but not always precise. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between ideas are logical and varied. Avoid repetitive sentence structures and use referencing and substitution to enhance flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at less common words like 'refurbished' and 'dissatisfaction'. However, there are inaccuracies and awkward phrasing, such as 'both pie charts have risen satisfaction' and 'the changes of numbers show a major development'. There is also a spelling error: 'Ahsdown' instead of 'Ashdown'. To improve, focus on using more precise and natural collocations, and proofread to avoid spelling mistakes. Expand your range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For instance, 'the pie illustrates survey' should be 'the pie charts illustrate the survey', and 'After refurbishment increased up to 40 percent' is incomplete. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and prepositions. To improve, pay attention to sentence construction, ensure subjects and verbs agree, and use appropriate prepositions. Proofreading can help eliminate these errors.

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