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Band 4+: The table below shows the percentage of men and women who travelled to,work by different means of transport in Sydney in 2001. Summarise, the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image details a table showing the percentage of men and women who traveled to work by various means of transport in Sydney in 2001: Men used buses 32%, cars 28%, motorbikes 5%, bikes 18%, and went on foot 17%, while women used buses 38%, cars 27%, motorbikes 2%, bikes 16%, and went on foot 17%.

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The table graph illustrated about percentages of male and female who travelled to work in Sydney in 2001 period.

Overall, Man and Woman who travelled to work by different transport haven’t small percentage. They used a lot of types of transportation like bus, car, motor bike,bike. However, some of them went on foot.

in detail, Male used the bus less than female. If they came for work, the company they work for must provide them with transportation. As we can see, Female used 6% more , than male. Male used the bus about 32% and female used about 38%, however, male used car for 1% more than female, it’s about 28%. A lot of male can drive the car, because of that they used more car than the female . The bus was used more than car, because not everyone has a drivers licence so that, all of them used the bus, car or just went on foot .

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant and speculative information (e.g., assumptions about company-provided transportation and reasons for car usage). The summary lacks a clear overview of the main trends and significant comparisons. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data from the table, highlighting key differences and similarities between men and women's transportation choices, and avoiding personal interpretations or assumptions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not well-connected, and the reasoning is often unclear. Paragraphing is weak, and the overall structure makes it difficult to follow the main points. For example, the connection between transportation and company provision is not clearly explained and seems speculative. Improve the flow of ideas by using cohesive devices and organizing the information more logically.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with limited range and accuracy. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and imprecise language. For example, phrases like 'haven't small percentage' and 'a lot of types of transportation' are not idiomatic. Expand your vocabulary and use more precise language to describe the data and make comparisons. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding. For example, 'Male used the bus less than female' and 'The table graph illustrated about percentages' contain grammatical errors. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction to enhance clarity and accuracy.

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