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Band 4+: The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries, The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image contains two separate data illustrations, a table on top and a horizontal bar graph below. The table lists percentages for the mode of transportation used for journeys to work by country- Canada: Car 90%, Bicycle 1%, Public transport 3%, On foot 5%, Other 1%; Belgium: Car 72%, Bicycle 12%, Public transport 12%, On foot 11%, Other 3%; Germany: Car 68%, Bicycle 2%, Public transport 18%, On foot 11%, Other 1%; Netherlands: Car 47%, Bicycle 26%, Public transport 8%, On foot 18%, Other 1%. The horizontal bar graph shows percentages for the most cited reasons people travel to work by car in Canada: Work nightshift 10%, Quicker 30%, Need for work 40%, Convenient 50%, No alternative 50%.

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The table displays the journey made by the transports in different countries like Canada, Belgium, Germany, Netherland and also bar chart represents the people travel to work have used the maximum transport is car in Canada

In Canada the highest journeys made by cars which is 90% while the other countries Belgium 72% and Germany 68% whereas Netherland shows minimal with 47%. The public transport is 3% which is very less compared with other like Belgium 12% and Germany 18%, Netherland 8%. When the perception on bicycle is minimum of 1% in Canada and maximum in Netherland of 26%.Here the On foot in Canada is 5% and Netherland is again 18% whereas other countries Belgium and Germany is 11%.

However, the bar chart estimates in Canada the people travel to work by Car with several different segments like some are nightshift workers while others quicker further more to describe about the people Need for work people are 30%, convenient people and others remains as alternative are almost close to 40% in Canada.

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canada: 6

netherland: 5

people: 5

belgium: 4

germany: 4

countries: 3

other: 3

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The report addresses the task, but there are some areas for improvement. The organization could be clearer, and the language used could be more precise. The report would benefit from a more structured approach, such as grouping information by country or mode of transport. Also, try to avoid repetition and aim for a more concise and focused summary of the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to summarize the information but lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not well-connected, and the transitions between different data points are abrupt. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate distinct topics or trends. To improve coherence, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific aspect of the data, and a concluding statement. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and sentences smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat repetitive. There's a limited range of words and phrases to describe the data, which affects the precision and sophistication of the report. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider variety of vocabulary related to transportation, percentages, and comparisons. Use synonyms and more precise terms to describe trends and differences in the data. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'shows,' consider alternatives like 'indicates,' 'demonstrates,' or 'reveals.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. These errors impede clarity and make the report difficult to understand in places. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammatical structures and practicing sentence construction. Review and correct errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and word order. Pay attention to punctuation and ensure that sentences are complete and grammatically sound.

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