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The image shows bar charts with data split for the years 1996 and 2000: in "Percentage of films released", Drama 1996=20%, 2000=25%, Comedy 1996=25%, 2000=20%, Fantasy 1996=10%, 2000=15%, Romance 1996=5%, 2000=5%; in "Percentage of Cinema ticket sales", Drama 1996=10%, 2000=12%, Comedy 1996=20%, 2000=23%, Fantasy 1996=5%, 2000=8%, Romance 1996=5%, 2000=5%.

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The chart illustrates the proportion of films released and proportion of cinema ticket sales in 1996 and 2000.Films are divided in four group, such as drama,comedy,fantasy and romance

Focusing on the 1996 , it is clear that drama and comedy were the leaders in the proportion of films released,accounting for approximately 27 and 20,while fantasy were slightly over 10 and romance were around 5 percent.Consequently, ticket sales in these genres showed a similar pattern,but this time comedy films were more in demand than drama movies.Fantasy and romance followed a similar trend.Focusing on the remaining year ,there is significant rise in releasing of films across all genres.All genres except romance witnessed increase in range of 5-10 percent.The same trend was followed in cinema’s ticket sales ,all genres except romance experienced some growth,while romance decreased by more than half,accounting for around 2 percent.

To sum up,romance the only genre that had loose in popularity ,while others became mor popular after 4 years.In addition,people started to watch more comedy films.

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films: 5

romance: 5

proportion: 3

ticket: 3

sales: 3

comedy: 3

genres: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, summarizing the main features of the charts and making some comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., 'approximately 27 and 20' for drama and comedy in 1996). The organization is generally clear, but could be improved with more distinct paragraphing. To improve, ensure data accuracy and enhance the clarity of comparisons by using more precise language and structuring the information more effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction is present, and the main trends are identified. However, the transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. For instance, the shift from discussing film releases to ticket sales could be smoother. Consider using transition words and phrases to link ideas more effectively. Also, ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and that the information within it is logically organized.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate for the task, but there is room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. While words like 'proportion,' 'accounting for,' and 'significant rise' are used correctly, the report could benefit from a wider range of synonyms and more specific language to describe the data. For example, instead of 'more in demand,' you could use 'more popular' or 'attracted a larger audience.' Enhancing the lexical resource will make the report more engaging and demonstrate a better command of the English language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Some examples include subject-verb agreement issues ('fantasy were slightly over 10'), incorrect use of articles ('the 1996'), and awkward phrasing ('releasing of films'). While the overall meaning is generally clear, these errors can distract the reader and reduce the impact of the report. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread the report for common errors and consider using grammar resources to reinforce your understanding of English grammar rules. Pay attention to sentence structure, verb tenses, and punctuation to enhance the overall quality of your writing.

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