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Band 4+: The two maps below show the changes in a town called Dalton from 1815 to 2015. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a comparison between 1815 and 2015 maps. In 1815, features: Dalton Forest, Ford, Bridleway, Hall Farm (3 buildings), Dalton Hall (6 buildings), Dalton (6 houses), River Dal running southeast, three north-south roads and one east-west road intersect near central Dalton. In 2015, features: Dalton (8 houses), Hospital, Industrial zone (5 two-story buildings), School, Airport with runway, Hotel (multi-story), Dalton Hall (5 buildings), trees reduced, River Dal's south crossing changed to bridge, road structure altered to include east-west axes bypassing Dalton, with a new north-south road near airport.

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The maps illustrare the differances in Dalton town between 1815 and 2015

Overall, Dalton town transformed from agracultural and green space to modernized and residantional area.

Most significiant change was green spaces were devided two part and modified residential area which was located in northern of the town and also had built industrial zone in western and southern side. Hovewer, had appaired hospital nerar to some trees which was next side of the houses.

Houses numbers had increased in northern side where right side of the river by cutting the trees Additionaly, middle of the town school had been instructed.Moreover all farm land which was called Hall Farm had been converted whith homes and hotel had built in east side of the town. Furthermore bridge had resambled thar was help to connect with River dal by ommited brideway. And aireport had been constructed in the south of the Dalton town.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main changes between the two periods, such as the increase in housing, the addition of an airport, and the conversion of farmland. However, the response lacks clarity due to significant grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which occasionally make the descriptions difficult to follow. To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary for describing spatial changes (e.g., 'replaced by', 'expanded', 'located adjacent to') and ensure that sentence structures are more cohesive. Aim to group information more logically to create a smoother flow of comparison.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report struggles to maintain a logical flow, making it difficult for the reader to follow the progression of changes. While you attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'Moreover', 'Furthermore'), they are often used incorrectly or do not effectively link the ideas. To improve, focus on organizing your body paragraphs by theme (e.g., one paragraph for residential/infrastructure changes and another for industrial/commercial changes) rather than listing changes randomly. Ensure that each sentence flows logically into the next to create a cohesive narrative of the town's transformation.

Lexical Resource

There is a limited range of vocabulary, and frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'illustrare', 'differances', 'agracultural', 'residantional', 'significiant', 'appaired', 'resambled', 'aireport') detract from the quality of the report. Additionally, some word choices are inaccurate or awkward (e.g., 'instructed' instead of 'constructed', 'ommitted brideway'). To improve, work on building a bank of academic synonyms for describing change (e.g., 'transformed', 'converted', 'expanded', 'replaced') and practice spelling common IELTS task-related words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impede communication. There are issues with sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the use of passive voice (e.g., 'hotel had built' instead of 'a hotel was built'). Many sentences are fragmented or contain errors in prepositional use (e.g., 'in northern of the town'). I recommend focusing on mastering basic sentence structures and the passive voice, which is essential for describing changes in maps. Pay close attention to article usage (a, an, the) and verb tenses when describing historical changes.

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