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Band 6+: The visuals give information about tl1e number of spacecran launched by various national governments between 1957 and 2007 and the purpose of each mission. Write a report for a university lecturer summarising the most important information in the visuals.

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The image contains two graphs: a pie chart and a bar graph. The pie chart illustrates the number of spacecraft launched by national governments from 1957-2007: Soviet Union/Russia 3484, USA 1760, Other 214, China 111, Canada 28, Japan 114, European Union 285, Commercial 539, India 48. The bar graph depicts the purposes for which spacecraft were launched from 1957-2007 with percentages of total launches: Communications approximately 17%, Surveillance satellites approximately 10%, Manned space program approximately 48%, Research approximately 17%, Weather observation approximately 3%, Planetary exploration approximately 5%.

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The pie graph illustrates the number of spacecraft launched by many international governments, and the bar chart displays the goal of different missions from 1957 to 2007.

Overall, Russia had the greatest number of spacecraft launched for all the time, in addition the USA sent the largest number of spacecrafts into space. India and Canada made up the least number of spacecraft launched. The highest percentage of total missions accounted for communications, whereas a small minority of planetary exploration.

Russia sent a large proportion of spacecraft with 3484. The second and the third highest proportions were spacecraft launched by the USA and Commercial, which constituted 1760 and 539. The European Union, other, Japan and China represented less significant shares of spacecraft sent with 285, 214, 114 and 111 respectively. India and Canada made up tiny fractions of spacecraft launched with 48 and 28.

According to the bar chart, communications and surveillance satellites represented the major percentage of total missions with approximately 25 and over just 20 percent. Research constituted the third highest portion with around a tenth of total missions. Manned space program, weather observation and planetary exploration with the slight difference accounted for a small percentage of total missions with about 5 percent.

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spacecraft: 7

launched: 5

missions: 5

number: 4

total: 4

highest: 3

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The data in the third paragraph is accurate, but the data in the fourth paragraph is not. For example, the report states that communications and surveillance satellites represented the major percentage of total missions with approximately 25 and over just 20 percent. However, according to the bar chart, the manned space program accounted for approximately 48% of total launches, communications accounted for approximately 17%, and surveillance satellites accounted for approximately 10%. To improve, ensure that the data presented in the report is accurate.

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The report presents a reasonable overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The 'Overall' paragraph is a good start, but the subsequent paragraphs could be more focused. Consider grouping information by key trends or categories to enhance coherence. For example, group countries with high launch numbers together and those with low numbers together. Also, the transitions between paragraphs could be smoother. Use transition words or phrases to connect ideas and guide the reader through the information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'number of spacecraft launched,' try using synonyms like 'space missions,' 'launches,' or 'orbital deployments.' Also, consider using more specific language to describe the proportions, such as 'a significant portion,' 'a considerable fraction,' or 'a negligible amount.' This will make your writing more engaging and demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

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The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and prepositional phrases. For example, 'Russia had the greatest number of spacecraft launched for all the time' could be revised to 'Russia launched the greatest number of spacecraft between 1957 and 2007.' Similarly, 'communications and surveillance satellites represented the major percentage of total missions with approximately 25 and over just 20 percent' needs restructuring for grammatical correctness and clarity. Proofread carefully to identify and correct these errors.

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