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Band 5+: This chart is about how much support employees receive for pursuing their education at different ages. Write four sentences about this chart using the four different styles introduced above.

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Employer support, by age group (Time off and help with fees)' with a vertical axis from 0 to 70. The chart displays data for five age groups: 'under 26' at a value of approximately 64, '26-29' at approximately 51, '30-39' at approximately 34, '40-49' at approximately 38, and 'over 49' at approximately 45.

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The presented bar graph illustrates the number of various age group of employees who receive supports for pursuing their edutional needs.

Overall, 26 to below aged group with highest number that helped with fees for achieve their studies, while 30 to 39 aged group have the least amount of people accepting supports.

With the most number of employees gets support, around 65 people, is dedicated to 26 to below aged group. Followed by 26 to 29 aged group which is 50 people, are able to continue their education as a result of receiving fees. With a slight disparity, around 45 people age over 49.

The last two groups with the least number of employees are age 40 to 49, followed by 30 to 39 aged group. With a very minor differences around 2 people,both of them almost 40 employers

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group: 6

number: 4

people: 4

employees: 3

their: 3

around: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in the bar chart, identifying the age groups with the highest and lowest levels of employer support. However, the description could be more precise and detailed, especially regarding the specific values for each age group. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data points and ensuring clarity in comparisons between different categories. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, making it difficult to follow the main points. Consider using more cohesive devices and structuring the report into distinct paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and imprecise descriptions. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to data analysis and use more specific terms to describe the trends and figures presented in the chart. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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