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Band 6+: This chart is about how much support employees receive for pursuing their education at different ages. Write four sentences about this chart using the four different styles introduced above.

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Employer support, by age group (Time off and help with fees)' with a vertical axis from 0 to 70. The chart displays data for five age groups: 'under 26' at a value of approximately 64, '26-29' at approximately 51, '30-39' at approximately 34, '40-49' at approximately 38, and 'over 49' at approximately 45.

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The graph illustrates the data of employees receiving support at different ages.

Overall, the youngest employees receive more support than other people. Over time, the amount of promotion being given drops.

The young employees receive a lot of promotion. People under 26 years old receive more support than those of older ages. This proves that young people are demanding. Between the ages of 26 and 29, the support given is less, however, not significantly.

The least amount of support is received between the ages of 30 and 39. The support given between the ages of 30 and 39 is approximately 2 times lower than that given to young employees. Elderly people receive approximately 45 supports. It seems that elderly people are respected.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

support: 6

people: 5

employees: 4

receive: 4

given: 4

young: 3

between: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and key data points from the bar chart. The overview is present and identifies the main trend. The report could be improved by providing more specific data comparisons and avoiding speculative statements. Also, the structure could be improved by grouping similar age ranges together for comparison. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally coherent and logically organized, with a clear progression of ideas. However, the transition between some sentences could be smoother to enhance the flow. For example, in the second paragraph, the connection between 'This proves that young people are demanding' and the preceding sentence could be clearer. Consider using transition words or phrases to link ideas more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to convey the information effectively. However, there's room to enhance the sophistication of word choice. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'support,' consider synonyms like 'assistance,' 'aid,' or 'incentives' to add variety. Also, phrases like 'a lot of promotion' could be replaced with more precise terms. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a good command of grammar with very few errors. The sentence structures are varied and generally accurate. To further improve, focus on refining sentence construction for conciseness and impact. For example, consider combining shorter sentences to create more complex and nuanced statements where appropriate.

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