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Band 5+: This graph shows the average temperatures in three cities over a two-month period.

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The image depicts a line graph titled "Average temperatures – Paris, Dubai and Melbourne," tracking temperature changes from April to June; Paris starts at 10°C in April, rising to 15°C in May, and reaching 20°C in June; Dubai begins at 25°C in April, escalating to over 30°C in May, and soaring above 35°C in June; Melbourne shows an initial 15°C in April, dipping below 15°C in May, and falling to nearly 10°C in June.

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The line graph compares the average temperature rates in Paris ,Dubai ,and MeLburne from April to June.

It is clear that the temperature in Paris was by far the highest rate of the period shown,while there was a slight change in climate in the other two cities.

In April ,the degree of temperature stood at just over 20 degree in Paris and saw the slight increased to about 25 degree in May ,temperature in Dubai was 10 degree, while in Melbourne, it was a bit more higher,under 15 cilcium in April.

Between May and June, the temperatures of rates rose dramatically to a peak of about 31 cilciums in June in Paris , which was the highest figure of the period shown. Dubai temperature continued to increase until the end of the period, reaching over the 15 degree. However, in Melbourne, the average temperature began to fall from 15 cilcium to 10 degree ,which was the lowest trend at the end of the period.

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The report adequately addresses the task by comparing temperatures across the three cities. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data presented.

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The report's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by some organizational and grammatical issues. Paragraphing could be improved for better clarity.

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