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Band 4+: This line graph below shows the change in Japanese average monthly salary and the price of two kinds of TV sets from 1953 to 1973.

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The image captures data trends from 1953 to 1973 depicting three lines: Monthly Salary rising steeply from 0 yen in 1953 to 200 yen in 1973; Color TV cost starts at around 150 yen in 1963 then falls to approximately 130 yen by 1973; White & Black TV cost begins at 250 yen in 1953 dropping to near 50 yen by 1973.

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The line chart compares the amount of tv prices and average salary changed from 1953 to 1973 in Japan.

Overall, the chart saw a fall trend except average salary.

In term of tv prices, almost 120 thousand yen of money estimated in black and white tv sector in 1953, while it unexpectedly decreased to 8 thousand yen in 1973. However, the amount of money accounted at 180 thousand yen in, where it rapidly decreased to 120 thousand yen from 1953 to 1973.

For the year, almost 120 thousand yen of money counted in average salary sector in 1953, while it gradually increased to 120 thousand yen in 1963. By 1973, it increased to 180 thousand yen. Although it started at 80, but it saw the peak at 180 thousand yen. Which remained the highest figure of money in the year 1973.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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thousand: 8

money: 4

average: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data representation. The overall trends are mentioned, but the specific values and timeframes are not always accurate. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graph, using precise language, and ensuring consistency in the units and values mentioned. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is difficult to follow due to abrupt transitions and a lack of clear connections between sentences. Consider using more cohesive devices and organizing the information into more logical paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of imprecise word choice. For example, using 'amount of tv prices' is not accurate. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and data, and ensure you use words appropriately. Also, the unit is 'yen', not 'thousand yen'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors significantly impact the clarity of the report. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. For example, 'In term of tv prices' should be 'In terms of TV prices'.

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