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Band 5+: Topic: You recently attended a training program at a local community center, but you were not satisfied with the quality of the training. Write a letter to the manager of the community center.

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Hello. My name is Mike. And for the past few months, i have been attending your training program.

The program suggested a quick surefire way to loose weight.

Initially, everything and everyone were great. I loved the staff, the area, the place. I got a personal traner, Sandra. She would get irritated from every question I would ask. I constantly woudl feel embarrassed, and, a little humiliated. Gradually she became more and more irritated of me, she would glaze at me, like I was pathetic. I tried to endure it, tried to stand her. But the other day, she said something really offensive, that was the last straw I shouted at her and left the building.

I no longer want her to be my personal trainer.

Sincerely Mike

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing dissatisfaction with the training program. However, it could be improved by providing more specific details about the program's shortcomings and the reasons for dissatisfaction. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The paragraphs are not well-organized, and the transitions between ideas are abrupt. The letter could benefit from more cohesive writing.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of inappropriate word choices and grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. These errors hinder the overall clarity and readability of the letter.

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