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Band 5+: Transport Modes ChartThe bar chart below shows the number of students who use different modes of transport to get to school. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Image for topic: Transport Modes ChartThe bar chart below shows the number of students who use different modes of transport to get to school. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Students' Preferred Transport Modes to School', where the y-axis represents the 'Number of Students' from 0 to over 40 in increments of 10, and the x-axis represents 'Transport Mode'. The data points for each transport mode are: Walking, 30 students; Bus, 45 students; Car, 20 students; and Bicycle, 15 students.

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The data illustrates the amount of different modes of transport are used by learners to go to school.

Overall, the bus is the most used mode of transport. The bicycle is the lowest used mode of transport compared with the other two to visit institution.

The most used transportation used by learners to go to school is bus. In addition, learner prefer to go the college by foot. The bus is the most used vehicle by students (more than 40 individuals use it). Walking is used by approximately 30 students as their transportation to go to the school.

Whilst, the car and the bicycle have lower frequent rather than the two other to used to visit the institution. The amount of learners whose use car as transport to college are just about 20 persons. The bicycle is the lowest used vehicle since it only has just under 20 students use it to visit the school

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

transport: 4

learners: 3

bicycle: 3

visit: 3

students: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies the main features of the bar chart, such as the most and least used modes of transport. However, the organization is somewhat repetitive, and the language contains inaccuracies. To improve, focus on using more precise language and avoiding redundancy by combining similar points into single, well-structured paragraphs. Also, ensure that the data is accurately represented and that comparisons are clear and concise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the main points. Consider grouping similar ideas together and using transition words to connect sentences and paragraphs more effectively. For example, you could start with an overview, then discuss the most popular modes, followed by the least popular ones. Avoid unnecessary repetition of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms and more precise language to describe the data. Try to expand your vocabulary related to transport and frequency. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'used,' consider alternatives like 'utilized,' 'chosen,' or 'preferred.' Also, use more specific terms like 'the majority' or 'a significant proportion' instead of just 'most.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structures are simple and lack complexity. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and practice constructing more varied sentence types. Pay attention to articles (a, an, the) and prepositions, as these are frequent sources of error. Proofread carefully to catch and correct these mistakes.

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