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The image displays pie charts for purposes of travel by passengers at four airports in 2016: Gatwick Airport indicates 54% for holiday, 25% for visiting friends/family, 14% for business, and 7% for other; Heathrow Airport shows 33% for holiday, 37% for visiting friends/family, 26% for business, and 4% for other; Luton Airport reveals 56% for holiday, 30% for visiting friends/family, 13% for business, and 1% for other; Stansted Airport states 46% for holiday, 30% for visiting friends/family, 14% for business, and 10% for other.

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These pie charts show the percentages indicating purposes of travel to England in 4 different airports (Gatwik, Heathrow, Luton, and Stansted) throughout 2016.

Overall, the two biggest reasons on why people travel into the country is to visit family and friends and to go on holiday.

In most airports, the upmost reason upon arriving in England is visiting relatives and friends. With Luton airport (50%) and Stansted airport (48%) having the most passengers coming in with this purpose. Although it isn’t a drastic difference with the other airports. An obvious gap can be seen with Heathrow airport (37%) and Gatwik airport (30%).

On the other hand, the second leading purpose of travel is holiday. Most people who arrive for holiday lands at Gatwik airport with the highest percentage of 54%. Whilst other airports have lower percentages, they remain similar to eachother. Example: Heathrow airport (33%), Luton airport (35%), and Stansted airport (36%).

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airport: 8

airports: 4

travel: 3

heathrow: 3

luton: 3

other: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies the main trends but contains some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the report states that Luton airport has 50% of passengers visiting relatives and friends, but the visual description states 30%. Also, the report states that Stansted airport has 48% of passengers visiting relatives and friends, but the visual description states 30%. The report also states that Luton airport has 35% of passengers arriving for holiday, but the visual description states 56%. To improve, ensure that the data reported is accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and attempts to highlight key trends, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping airports based on similar trends or comparing specific categories across all airports in a more structured manner. The transitions between paragraphs could also be smoother to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to travel purposes and airport comparisons. For instance, instead of 'the upmost reason,' consider using 'the primary reason' or 'the most common purpose.' Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct use of prepositions, and accurate sentence structure. For example, 'the two biggest reasons on why people travel' should be 'the two biggest reasons why people travel.' Proofread carefully to eliminate these errors.

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