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Band 7+: Two charts: a line graph shows the number of people granted UK citizenship (in thousands) from 1992 to 2002 and a bar graph illustrates the number of people (in thousands) from Asia, Africa, America, Europe, Australia, and others, receiving UK citizenship in 1996 and 2002.

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The image includes a line graph and a bar chart. The line graph shows people who became UK citizens from 1962 to 2002, with values: 1962 at 20, 1972 at 30, 1982 at 55, 1992 at 65, and 2002 at 120. The bar chart details immigrant origins to the UK in thousands for 1996 and 2002; 1996: Asia 49, Africa 9, Europe 5, America/Australasia/others 9. For 2002: Asia 58, Africa 25, Europe 27, America/Australasia/others 4.

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The number of persons who received UK citizenship, as well as their origin, has been depicted by a line chart and a bar graph from 1992 to 2002. The data has been calibrated in thousands.

Overall, it is noticeable that, Asia recorded highest number of immigrants to the United Kingdom, whereas it was lowest in terms of America, Australia and others. Conversely, there was a significant increase in the number of UK citizens over the period.

According to the details, in 1962, there were about 20,000 permanent residents in United kingdom .Afterwards, it peaked at 40,000 in a period of 10 years. Surprisingly, till 1992 , the number of natives dropped by 10,000 and then soared to 1,20,000 from 1992 to 2002.

Turning to the further details, in 1996 , 49 thousand immigrants came to England and then the figure climbed to 58,000 in 2002. Although only 9000 people from Europe and Africa came to Britain , then surged to 27,000 and 25,000 respectively in 2002. Surprisingly, other countries observed a significant decline in the population of inhabitants by 1000 in 2002.

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the requirements of the task, providing a general overview and highlighting key trends from both the line graph and the bar chart. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions that could be improved. The report includes some data from 1962, 1972 and 1982 which are outside of the specified range (1992-2002). To improve, focus on the specific time frame mentioned in the task instructions and ensure all data points are accurate. Also, try to include more comparative language to highlight the differences and similarities between the regions and time periods.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and specific details. However, the connection between some sentences could be smoother. For instance, in the third paragraph, the shift from 1962 to 1992 feels a bit abrupt. Consider using transition words or phrases to improve the flow between ideas. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, such as 'peaked,' 'soared,' and 'significant decline.' However, there are instances where the word choice could be more precise or natural. For example, instead of 'Turning to the further details,' you could use 'Regarding the immigrant origins.' Also, avoid repetition by using synonyms where appropriate. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are some grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'Asia recorded highest number of immigrants' should be 'Asia recorded the highest number of immigrants.' Pay close attention to articles, prepositions, and verb tense consistency. Proofreading carefully can help identify and correct these errors.

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Band 7+: Two charts: a line graph shows the number of people granted UK citizenship (in thousands) from 1992 to 2002 and a bar graph illustrates the number of people (in thousands) from Asia, Africa, America, Europe, Australia, and others, receiving UK citizenship in 1996 and 2002.

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