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Band 8+: Write a formal letter to the cinema's director. You are visited the newly built cinema and you didn't like happening in it.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my concern regarding the film recommended by the manager of the newly built cinema. Unfortunately, the film was not very interesting, and the cinema was also not as impressive as its advertisement.

The main reason for my writing is that I wasted my money on this bad movie called “Avengers”. Moreover, the film was stopped halfway by the cinema management during the screening.

This situation became even worse because the workers were disrespectful to customers. Furthermore, the snacks and drinks were overpriced, which resulted in wasting my valuable time, money, and nerves.

I would therefore appreciate it if you could return my money or give me another ticket.

It would be highly beneficial if the administration and workers at the cinema became more polite, reduced the prices of snacks and drinks, improved the quality of the movies, and changed the furniture as soon as possible.

I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,

Davron Xolmuradov.

Word Count: 165

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Overall Band Score

8

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

cinema: 4

money: 3

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing concerns about a cinema visit. The points are generally relevant, but some aspects could be more clearly developed. To improve, focus on providing more specific details about the issues encountered and ensuring a consistently formal tone throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

8

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The progression of ideas is logical, and the use of cohesive devices like 'Moreover' and 'Furthermore' enhances the flow. Paragraphing is effective. To further improve, consider varying the sentence structure slightly to avoid repetition and enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

8

The vocabulary used is appropriate and demonstrates a good range. Terms like 'express my concern,' 'not as impressive,' and 'disrespectful to customers' are well-chosen. To enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary related to cinema experiences and customer service.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter demonstrates excellent grammatical control. A wide range of structures is used accurately and appropriately. Punctuation is also handled well throughout the letter. There are virtually no grammatical errors.

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