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Band 6+: Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you'd like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

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Dear Jack,

How have your been? The purpose of my writing here is to seek your help to create a website for me. First, let me describe the nature of my business to you and as you may know that I am still running a clothing business online.

There are some things I would love to include on this website and I need payment page, contact us section. To give you a better idea on my ideal website, you can refer to Lazada.com. I want the main page of my portal to feature all the latest clothes with price tags which I will send you all the price lists and images as well in a separate email.

As stated, I suggest you can use Lazada website as blueprint for my website and you can use the images of my models on my website and please include discounted price for each my merchandise. Please give me a quotation for this website via this email, thanks for your prompt reply.

Friend,

Benny

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

website: 7

price: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear description of the business, desired website features, and image ideas. However, it could be more detailed in its description of the business and website features.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally well-organized, but some sentences lack clarity and flow. The use of paragraphs could be improved for better readability.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some phrases could be more precise and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains some grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. The use of punctuation and sentence structure could be improved.

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Band 6+: Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you'd like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

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