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Band 4+: Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you'd like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

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Dear Avni,

I hope you are doing fantastic in your life. I am well aware that you are website developer and I really need your help to built my business site. Recently, I have started a startup of candle business. It’s all home based and mostly depended on orders we will be getting on our site. We have varities of candles with different size, clour, and flavours.

On my website, for the first glance of customer, I need you to make a attractive front page,After that second page is about the varities of candle with beautiful pictures, Catalog, and discription.

For pictures of candle I would advise you to go for a plane white background and with little flowers that will make them more photogenic.

Word Count: 125

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

candle: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The description of the business and website content is clear. However, more detail could enhance the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and sentence structure. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would improve the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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