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Band 6+: Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your previous job describe your new job tell him/her your other news

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Dear Ida,

I just changed my job recently. The location of that job was too far from my home. It was really very time-consuming for me to commute/go to work. The working environment wasn’t conducive to teamwork because most of my colleagues were very lazy and not very supportive, however I am a very productive person and always want to get things done quickly. I found it really frustrating to work there, so I found a new job!

This is really my dream job. Not only is the company only 5 mins away from my home but the people there are very driven and I really love the atmosphere, as they encourage everyone to share and collaborate. The company even organises weekly team building activities like, playing basketball to help us become better friends.

By the way, I gained 2 more kilo last month. The bulking has been going very well and I’ve been enjoying delicious and nutritious foods.

What have you been up to? Can’t wait to hear from you.

Best wishes,

Lynn

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
really: 4
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Task Response

5
The letter partially addresses the task by explaining the reason for changing the previous job and describing the new job. However, the explanation lacks detail and coherence. The other news is unrelated to the task and should have included personal news as per the task requirements.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented in a logical order. However, there are some lapses in coherence, such as the abrupt transition to personal news. Additionally, the paragraphing is not effectively managed, as the second paragraph should have been divided into two separate paragraphs for better organization.

Lexical Resource

7
The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some sophisticated and natural expressions. However, there are a few inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that slightly affect the overall lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
There is a variety of sentence structures used, but there are also some grammatical errors and punctuation issues throughout the letter. More attention to grammatical accuracy is needed to improve the score.

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