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Band 5+: write a letter to manager. in your letter say what you have learned in your job

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Dear,

I hope this letter finds you well. In fact, I am writing this letter to inform you that I had finished two years in my position. To be honest I am welling to improve my career and my experience, Additionally, I have the passion to participate in company developing plan as well as I am enthusiastic to give chance to the young people to prove that they can be mange all tasks that have been done by myself.

On the other hand, I would like to bring to your concern that I had learnt adequate skills to responsible about section of marketing, moreover, currently I have enormous details about the other competitive companies which will boost my experience to be the best candidate to leader of the marketing section.

Ultimately, I would like to inform you that I have not the desire to leave the company and I hope to stay and share all of my experience with the other colleagues.

Thank you for your consideration and I hope to meet you soon to discuss that topic.

Best regards.

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