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Band 4+: Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college

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I hope this email finds you well. My name is Amanda and I am one of the student that rent the room 202 building B.

I would like to see the posibility to change the room that I share, the last few month a have a lot of probleme with the person that I live. The situation is that the another girl do a lot of partys in the room, and they stay to late and never clean the room the next day. This situation have me bring problems in my studies and in the work because I do not sleep enoght.

I want to request if you can find me another acommodation, I hope can be in the same building where I am now, with a min. 40m2, natural light, and a queen bed.

I hope you can help me with this situation soon as posible.

Kind regards.

Amanda Schmitt

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task and clearly conveys the student's request for a room change. The reason for the request is explained, and specific preferences for the new room are stated.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is generally understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The organization could be improved with clearer paragraphing and transitions.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or in an unnatural way. The student could benefit from expanding their vocabulary and using more precise language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the message. The student needs to improve their understanding of grammar rules and practice using correct sentence structures.

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