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Band 6+: write a letter to the head of the dept of education to aprreciation of the couse that you attended

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Dear sir,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter regarding how your efforts in the course you taught me have had a great impact on my future career. Last year, I enrolled in the supply chain management course at your college. It was related to how products Supply chain works, and how we can check and track inventory through the ERP system. Earlier, I was a bit nervous because this subject was new to me, but due to the effort of your staff members, I achieved higher grades.

Currently, I am working in the logistics department so I can use my skills regarding supply chain management in our organization, this not only helps me to reduce stock shortage but is also very fruitful for increasing sales. Thus, I can implement my theoretical knowledge into practical ones. Everyone knows that If we do not control our inventory then we can achieve our desired outcomes.

Thank you once again for your efforts.

your faithfully,

Raman

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

supply: 3

chain: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing appreciation for the course. Minor improvements in clarity and structure could enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some improvements in logical flow and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the grammar is mostly correct, some minor errors affect the overall fluency and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy will enhance the overall score.

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