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Band 4+: Write a letter to the local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket, you need to write the following? - where did you get this information? - The disadvantage of having a supermarket instead of a library. - Importance of having library.

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Dear sir/Madam,

I’m Angel Peters. A resident of Miami street. I’m writing this letter regarding replacement of a library instead of supermarket.

Me and my neighbours were suffering from visitors. First of all, There were littering around our apartment. Secondly, specifically in an evening crowded an environment with hustle and bustle voices leads irritating atmosphere. Additionally, tourists parked their vehicles anywhere so that, traffic congestion issues arise on a daily basis. From social media I got this information and I am a glad such an amazing revolution.

Community dwelling individuals spend their leisure time with use of storybook, magazine and journals. All generations take advantage of library with well ventilation and peaceful environment. However, construction of library would be beneficial than Walmart.

I look forward for positive response and promt consideration of my application.

Yours faithfully,

Angel Peters.

Word Count: 138

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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library: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but could be more detailed in explaining the disadvantages of a supermarket and the importance of a library. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The ideas are not well connected, and the writing is sometimes difficult to follow.

Lexical Resource

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some choices are not always accurate or appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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Band 4+: Write a letter to the local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket, you need to write the following? - where did you get this information? - The disadvantage of having a supermarket instead of a library. - Importance of having library.

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Write a letter to the local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket, you need to write the following? – where did you get this information? – The disadvantage of having a supermarket instead of a library. – Importance of having library.

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