🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!

Letter

Band 4+: Write a letter to the restaurant manager to organize a party.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

I am writing to this letter a book party in your hotel on 30th August. My name is Divy Patel. One of my friend refer your restaurant . Approximately 150 guest will be attending this party, so I want to book spacious hall.

I want stage for group dance party also arrange DJ. I need a multi cusines food in menu because people from different culture will attend this party. Make sure you don’t make a spicy food. Moreover, I need a marvel theme decoration for children. You have to arrange sofa for old age people and also enough servers for all people.

In last, I have few questions. Which kind of food options are available in your menu? Can you send me approximately price for this party? Do you have enough parking space?

Looking forward to your response

Your sincerely

Divyakumar Patel

Word Count: 143

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 4

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively conveys the purpose of booking a party and includes all necessary details. However, it could be more concise and organized. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The ideas are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the message.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely appropriate for a formal letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the message.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Write a letter to the restaurant manager to organize a party.

Dear sir or madam, trust this letter finds you in good health. I am reaching out with great excitement to discuss the organization of a retirement party at Haveli. After 10 years of dedicated service, Tom Hollan is bidding farewell to the workforce. To celebrate this momentous occasion, we are interested in hosting a retirement […]

Band 8+

See All

Other Topics:

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

Dear Thomas, How are you? I’m really excited because I’ll be visiting you in China soon! Since I have never been there before, I’d love to ask you a few things before I leave. First, I’d like to bring a gift for your family. What do you think would be a good gift for them? […]

Band 9

You have been offered a place at a university and wish to find suitable accommodation. Write a letter to the accommodation officer including the following information: the type of accommodation you wish to find; some details about yourself; any special requirements you may have and any other relevant information.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire about accommodation for the upcoming academic year, as I have recently been offered a place on the M.Sc. Microbiology program commencing this September. My student ID is 123456. I am looking for off-campus accommodation in a shared house with two or three other students. Ideally, each […]

Band 9

You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter, say who are you give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

Dear Manager, I am writing to inform you about a minor accident I experienced at your supermarket on August 18, 2026. While walking through the produce aisle, I slipped on a wet patch on the floor that lacked a warning sign. I injured my elbow in the fall, which left me in pain for the […]

Band 9

You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter, say who are you give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

Dear Manager, I am writing to inform you about a minor accident occurred at your supermarket. As I visited your store on August 18,2026. While walking through the produce aisle, I slipped on a wet patch of the floor that had no warning sign nearby. Unfortunately, my elbow has been injured which left me in […]

Band 6+

You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery - Explain the importance of this delivery - Ask for a replacement item to be sent

Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing this letter to complain about my recent online order on your website. Last week, I ordered 2 dresses that are blue and pink. However, when the package arrived yesterday, I found the blue dress was missing That dress is very important for me because I would like to wear […]

Band 6+

You recently attended a concert at a local venue, but were very disappointed with the experience. Write a letter to the venue management complaining about the concert experience. You should include details about: - the specific issues you encountered during the concert - how these problems detracted from your enjoyment - what resolution you are hoping for, such as a refund or voucher.

Dear sir/madam, I am writing this letter in order to complaint about the inefficient management of the “Stary Nights” concert by renouned artist Millie Brown that took place last week at City Hall, Ludhiana, Punjab, India. To start with, I would first like to complaint about the late commencement of the event than what was […]

Band 7+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium