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Band 6+: Write a letter to your business partner. In your letter: tell what business you are going to do. explain what you need for your business. tell what result you are expecting from the business. Write about 150 words in an appropriate format and style.

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Dear Mr Stive,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my new business plan, which looks like our business in the present.

Nowadays, restaurant businesses do not face bankruptcy; therefore, I decide to start a new restaurant business, but this time, it will be exclusive. In this situation, I planned that we open a small buffet in a game club that we opened in our last project.

You know that the restaurant business is not elementary; therefore, I need some financial support from you. According to my plan, we must have an empty place for our buffet and a variety of food and drink products because we should have different products which consumers want.

In my calculations, if we invest 10,000 dollars in running this business, we will refund this money with our profits in 2 months. After 2 months, we only gain in this business, and the amount of profit may be 5,000 dollars every month.

I would love to discuss this idea further with you and hear your thoughts. Please let me know when would be a good time for us to meet.

I look forward to your response soon.

Yours sincerely,

Dilshod Namozov

Word Count: 198

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

business: 6

restaurant: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The business plan is clearly explained, and the letter is well-organized.

Coherence & Cohesion

7

The letter flows well and is easy to follow. The ideas are logically connected, and the paragraphs are appropriately structured.

Lexical Resource

6

The vocabulary is sufficient for the task, but there is room for improvement in using more precise and sophisticated language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

While the grammar is mostly correct, there are a few minor errors that could be improved for greater accuracy and fluency.

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