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Band 8+: Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: Say what would you do differently than last year Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.

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Dear Team,

I hope you’re all doing well. As we prepare for this year’s annual work party, I’m excited to work with you to make it exceptional. I propose we introduce a themed dress code to bring more excitement and create a vibrant atmosphere, which I believe will be a refreshing change from last year’s casual attire.

Reflecting on last year’s event, I noticed the lack of interactive activities might have led to reduced engagement. To improve this, I suggest we incorporate team-building games or even a talent show, which could enhance participation and create lasting memories.

Let’s meet to discuss these ideas and finalize our plans. How about we gather at the café on Main Street next Tuesday at 10 AM? It’s a cozy spot that should be perfect for our brainstorming session.

I look forward to hearing your thoughts.

Best regards,

Jitendra Singh

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Band 8+: Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: Say what would you do differently than last year Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.

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