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Band 5+: Write a letter to your father on success in exams

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Dear father,

I hope you are in good health.I am writing this letter to inform you that I have passed my matriculation examination with distinction. I stood first in my class. I also took 3rd postion in overall AJK board.

I am very happy and want to share this good news with you because without your support, this was not possible for me. I wants to thank you for always being there for me.

I will try my best in the future to fulfill your dreams. Always remember me in your prayers.

Looking forward to hear from you soon.

Word Count: 99

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Overall Band Score

5.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5
The letter appropriately addresses the task, conveying the news of exam success and expressing gratitude. The content is relevant and sufficient. To further enhance the letter, consider adding specific details about future plans or how the success will impact them. Also, proofread carefully to eliminate minor grammatical errors. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, and the information is presented in a logical order. However, the transition between expressing happiness and thanking the father could be smoother. Consider adding a sentence that directly links the achievement to the father's support before transitioning into the thank you.

Lexical Resource

6
The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context and conveys the message effectively. Words like 'distinction' and 'overall' are well-chosen. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider using more varied vocabulary to express gratitude and future aspirations. For example, instead of 'I will try my best,' you could use 'I am committed to' or 'I aspire to'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The letter contains some grammatical errors, such as 'I wants to thank you' and '3rd postion'. While these errors do not significantly impede understanding, correcting them would improve the overall quality of the writing. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct ordinal number usage ('3rd position' should be '3rd position'). Also, ensure consistent tense usage throughout the letter.

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