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Band 6+: Write the letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter, explain that you would like to apply for the job give some details of any relevant experience that you have specify the days and times that would suit you. Dear Sir / Madam,

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Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to you about the position of waiter, in your Chilli Restaurant at Watford Station. I am keenly interested in working for your company, as I read many positive outcomes. Please, consider my application.

I am the right person for you, as I have previous experience in catering. I worked before as a waiter at conferences, where I served food for a minimum of 100 people. Moreover, my knowledge of shaking and mixing cocktails can impress your customers, which I gained from my barman course. My last benefit is a friendly approach to clients, which I adopted as a receptionist at the Makro Hotel.

We can arrange my date of starting, but I am not able to start before April 15, 2024. I am a single mum, therefore I have to adapt my time to my offspring. I can work during the week from 8 am to 4 pm, as well as each second weekend, because my kids visiting my grandparents.

Thank you for consideration of my application.

Yours faithfully,

Nicol Langmayer.

Word Count: 178

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing the intention to apply for the waiter position, providing relevant experience details, and specifying preferred working days and times. However, it could be improved by directly mentioning the desire to work at the Chilli Restaurant and by being more specific about the positive outcomes mentioned.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically presented. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between discussing experience and availability. Consider smoother transitions between paragraphs for better cohesion.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter, and some sophisticated words and phrases are included. However, there are a few instances of awkward phrasing and inaccuracies that slightly affect the overall lexical resource score. Try to use more varied vocabulary and ensure accuracy in word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences. However, there are some errors in punctuation and grammar that impact the overall accuracy. Review the use of commas and ensure subject-verb agreement for improved accuracy.

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