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Band 8+: WRITING TASK 1 UNIT 7 Write a report for the following chart. You should spend at least 20 minutes on this chart. The bar chart shows the divorce rates in three European cites from 2013 to 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: WRITING TASK 1 UNIT 7 Write a report for the following chart. You should spend at least 20 minutes on this chart. The bar chart shows the divorce rates in three European cites from 2013 to 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows divorce rates for London, Paris, and Istanbul from 2013 to 2017: in 2013, London at 20%, Paris at 25%, Istanbul at 35%; in 2014, London at 27%, Paris at 22%, Istanbul at 36%; in 2015, London at 30%, Paris at 21%, Istanbul at 30%; in 2016, London at 26%, Paris at 24%, Istanbul at 33%; in 2017, London at 28%, Paris at 10%, Istanbul at 30%.

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The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of divorce rates in London, Paris and Istanbul from 2013 to 2017.

Overall, the divorce rate in London increased over the period, whereas that of Paris fluctuated considerably. Meanwhile, Istanbul had the highest divorce rate for most of the period, although its figure gradually decreased after reaching a peak in 2014.

Moving to the details, in 2013, the divorce rate in London was approximately 16%, which was lower than those in Paris and Istanbul, at 20% and 28%, respectively. In 2014, the figure for London increased slightly to around 18%, which was as high as that of Paris. It then rose significantly to approximately 24% in 2015 and reached about 26% in 2016. The rate remained almost unchanged in 2017.

In contrast, Paris showed considerable fluctuations. Its divorce rate decreased from 20% in 2013 to approximately 18% in 2014 and 15% in 2015. It then increased sharply to around 23% in 2016 before falling considerably to approximately 9% in 2017. Meanwhile, Istanbul reached a peak of around 34% in 2014 before gradually declining to approximately 27% by 2017.

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divorce: 5

paris: 5

approximately: 5

london: 4

istanbul: 4

increased: 3

around: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and detailed comparisons of divorce rates across the three cities. The overall trends are correctly identified, and the data is presented in a logical structure. However, there are some inaccuracies in the specific figures (e.g., London's 2013 rate is stated as 16% instead of 20%, and Paris's 2013 rate as 20% instead of 25%). To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately reported. Additionally, the report could benefit from a more precise description of the trends, such as noting that London's rate generally increased but with a slight dip in 2016. Overall, the response is well-organized and covers the main features, but attention to data accuracy is needed.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure, including an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Moving to the details', and 'In contrast' helps the reader follow the progression of ideas. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the transition between the overview and the detailed paragraphs, which could be smoother. Additionally, the final sentence about Istanbul could be better integrated with the preceding discussion to enhance flow. Overall, the message is easy to follow, and paragraphing is managed effectively.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, including terms like 'illustrates', 'fluctuated', 'reaching a peak', 'gradually declining', and 'considerable fluctuations'. The language is generally precise and natural, with some sophisticated control (e.g., 'as high as that of Paris'). However, there is some repetition of phrases like 'approximately' and 'around', and a few expressions could be more varied (e.g., 'increased slightly' could be 'rose marginally'). Overall, the lexical resource is strong, but there is room for more flexibility and variety.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a wide range of grammatical structures accurately, including comparative forms, passive voice, and complex sentences. Punctuation is correct, and there are no significant grammar errors. The sentences are generally well-constructed, and the report maintains a formal tone. However, there are a few minor issues, such as the use of 'which was as high as that of Paris' could be slightly awkward, and the final sentence could be more concise. Overall, the grammar is strong, with only minor lapses that do not affect clarity.

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