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Band 4+: WRITING TASK 1 You have recently moved to a new neighborhood and would like to join a sports center there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, introduce yourself say why are you interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, membership, costs etc.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in your private sports club.

My full name is Vafaeva Kamila Mansurovna. Iam 17 years old and I achive girl in my goal.

So, I seen in your advaresment a few days ago and I really like your sports club. Because I would prefer exercise in free time. I have to a lot of time in sports. And I think your course fits for me perfectly. I appreciate in your classes. I believe that I am very interest your sport club.

I want ask you about your club. I want to applyling in your sport club. I believe that you very kindly and accept me your club.

I have asking you about how much people have in your club. And I want ask you about pricess:

I really appreciate your time, and I want to say thank you in advance.

Your faithfully

Vafaeva

Word Count: 156

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
sports: 3
about: 3
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Task Response

5
The letter addresses the task by introducing the writer, expressing interest in the sports club, and asking questions about the club. However, there are some irrelevant details and the questions could be more specific to the facilities, membership, and costs.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter is somewhat coherent but lacks a clear structure. There are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Additionally, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4
There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. More precise and accurate word choices would enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, the language could be more formal and professional.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, including issues with verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. More attention to grammar and sentence construction is needed to improve accuracy.

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