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Band 6+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image contains a bar chart showing percentages of Australian men and women engaging in regular physical activity in 2010 by age group. For ages 15 to 24: men 52.8%, women 47.7%; 25 to 34: men 42.2%, women 48.9%; 35 to 44: men 39.5%, women 52.5%; 45 to 54: men 43.1%, women 53.3%; 55 to 64: men 45.1%, women 53%; 65 and over: men 46.7%, women 47.1%.

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The bar chart compares the percentage of physical activity that men and women of different age groups had in 2010. It can be seen from the graph that the highest physical activity participation rate is among women when compared to men, except for the age group of 15 to 24.

Regarding the age group of 15 to 24, obviously women had more physical doings time than men, with approximately 53% compared to 40% to men. In the age group of 25 to 44, the percentage rate rose at 48.9% to 52.5%, while teenagers and older individuals who participated were lower, at 47.7% and 47.1% respectively.

Male sports participation was notably high among young adults 15 to 24, it is clear that teenagers and young adults were the most active, with roughly 53% involved in regular activities. However, participation rates among men aged 25 to 64 showed a decline, falling to between 40% to 45%.

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The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making relevant comparisons. Minor inaccuracies in data presentation could be improved for a higher score.

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