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Band 4+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mrs Barrett,

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Dear Mrs Barrett,

I am writing in response to the advertisement which I have seen yesterday evening. Actually, i want to tell you that it will be perfectly suitable for me to work in your house as a part-time helper.

Well, I have good experience of cooking food, cleaning the floor and sometimes as a gardener. So, It is an honoured to become a care taker of the brilliant officer wife home.

According to my perspective, I would love to do so because in summer, my work is going to be bit slow.

The last thing I want to share that I will be available in the mornings of the weekdays except weekends. Hoping to hear the confirmation about job. For any further details contact me.

Yours Sincerely,

Harpreet Singh.

Word Count: 130

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, more detail and elaboration would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is understandable, but the flow could be smoother with improved sentence structure and transitions. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact. Some vocabulary choices are slightly informal for this context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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