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Band 4+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart and table below show the results of a survey of library users at a university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a pie chart titled 'Categories of library users' and a table titled 'Library user satisfaction (%)'. The pie chart shows the breakdown of users as: Full-time undergraduate 44%, Full-time postgraduate 25%, Part-time postgraduate 16%, Distance learning (all courses) 8%, and Academic staff 7%. The table details user satisfaction across three levels ('Very satisfied', 'Fairly satisfied', 'Not satisfied') for five categories: Library opening hours (65, 35, 0), Helpfulness of staff (95, 5, 0), Availability of books (50, 40, 10), Availability of journals (45, 35, 20), and Reliability of wi-fi (48, 33, 19).

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The glance at the graph provided reveals the proportion of survey conducted for library users and their satisfaction rating at a one major University.

It is evident from the pie chart that the highest full time undergraduate person is using library, accounting at 44%, while full- time postgraduate is the second highest for using, which is only 25%. However, the least using library is acedemic staff and distance learning (all course), which is 7% and 8% respectively. Part-time post graduation is double the amount of distance learning.

In terms of table data, most of the people is very satisfied and fairly satisfied to using library. Apart from that, 65% feel very satisfied for library opning hours, whereas 35% feel fairly satisfied. However, 95% the higher number of individuals feel satisfied but only 5% feel fairly satisfied. Moreover, half of people feel satisfied for availability of books and 10% decrease amount feel fairly, while 10% feel not satisfied.

Overall, it can be said that the highest full-time undergraduate use library, whereas academic staff and distance learning (all course) use less librery. Also, the higher amount of people feel satisfied but less individuals feel not satisfied to using library.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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satisfied: 9

library: 7

using: 5

fairly: 4

highest: 3

distance: 3

amount: 3

people: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by mentioning both the pie chart and the table. However, the response is somewhat repetitive, particularly in the overview, and the data reporting is occasionally unclear or incomplete. For example, in the table analysis, some categories are mentioned without clearly stating which satisfaction level they refer to (e.g., '95% the higher number of individuals feel satisfied'). To improve, ensure that every data point is clearly linked to its specific category and metric. Additionally, work on grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to ensure that comparisons are logical and easy for the reader to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and repetitive sentence structures. To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Regarding,' 'With respect to') to link ideas more smoothly. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that transitions between the pie chart analysis and the table analysis are more fluid.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite limited and often repetitive (e.g., frequent use of 'feel' and 'using'). There are several instances of incorrect word choices and spelling errors (e.g., 'acedemic', 'opning', 'librery', 'post graduation'). To reach a higher band, aim to use more precise academic vocabulary for describing data, such as 'comprised,' 'represented,' 'constituted,' or 'expressed satisfaction.' Avoid informal phrasing like 'the highest... person is using'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'most of the people is'), preposition usage (e.g., 'satisfied for'), and sentence construction (e.g., '95% the higher number of individuals'). Work on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that singular/plural nouns match their corresponding verbs. Pay close attention to the use of articles and prepositions to improve the overall accuracy of your writing.

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