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Band 5+: WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image shows two bar graphs comparing people born in Australia and outside Australia living in cities, towns, and rural areas in 1995 and 2010. In 1995, people born in Australia living in cities, towns, and rural areas are approximately 50, 30, and 50 respectively, while people born outside Australia are around 20, 10, and 5. In 2010, people born in Australia in cities, towns, and rural areas are approximately 70, 40, and 60, and people born outside Australia are around 50, 20, and 10.

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The bar chart show changes about the percentage of people were born in and outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. There was increased people lived in cities in both population of people born in or outside Australia from 1995 to 2010.

In 1995, largest population of people in Australia were in the cities. There was 20 poin higher people population lived in the cities were born outside Australia in 1995. The second largest people population in 1995 were living in rural areas. The smallest population in 1995 live in towns.

In the other hand, in 2010 the smallest people population were living in rural areas. While, in the 2010 still largest people population were living in Cities. Even the growing numbers of people born outside Australia were living in cities almost 35% higher than in 2010 than 1995. There was only small growing of people born in Australia lived in Cities.

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population: 7

australia: 6

cities: 6

living: 5

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Task Response

5.5

The main features are identified, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report. The comparisons are somewhat limited.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report is somewhat organized but lacks overall coherence. There are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and repetitions. More precise and varied vocabulary could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There is a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are errors in sentence structure, verb tense, and agreement.

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